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Nowadays it is more difficult for children to concentrate or pay attention in school. Discuss the causes and propose a solution.
Concentration is very important for studying. It is believed that focusing on lessons is far from easy with students in the modern life. In the scope of my essay, I will shed light on both causes and solutions for this phenomenon.
Firstly, it is argued that technology is the culprit of distraction in students. Due to mobile phone popularity, children are addicted with games and social networks than their main duty. For example, a lot of children in America now are using phone in primary and secondary schools, as a result, their performance witnesses a dramatic downward trend. Secondly, theo...
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