Nowadays, in many places it is found that children are given more freedom than they require. What do you think, is it a positive or negative development?
In most places, it is widely seen that parents are so flexible in controlling their wards beyond the permissible limit. This trend has been rapidly soaring, which in turn rises hot debates in today’s society. In my view, I foresee that this excessive independence given to young people would pave detrimental effects to their career and life.
To begin with, one of the major negative effects, because of letting children independently, is that there is a greater risk of the shift from a right directed path to a wrong track in the life. This can be seen from the fact that when parents do not c...
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