Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying & doing (for example, through cell phone tracking & security cameras).In many cases , the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening.
-Give reasons of your answer & include any relevant example.
Day by day technology are increasing and people allured by fancy and innovative gadgets.People are using technology because it save their time and it does work very perfectly but some people use technology for wrong work. Nowadays, people are security cameras and they are tracking cell phone but every coin has two side , positive & negative. Both the advantages and disadvantages are being described in the later paragraphs.
On the brighter side,Every criminal have their own cell phone and because of that, they contact with their master, so tracking device help defense people to catch them group and with help of tracking device defense people find criminal location and easily catch criminal. More over, major use of camera is security & camera also useful in school and college to show students and teacher behavior. Further more, in city area government puts camera on road for traffic control and because of camera they easily control crime .In addition to,camera also help in monitoring tourist place.
On the darker side,because of camera and tracking device, some time people feels insecure and disable. Besides, some people easily hack that and collects some important memory. Many more, some time terrorist, naxelities ,secret agents are hacking camera and collect some important details. Further more,because of camera and tracking device people privacy are hurting. Majority people thinks that, with help of camera,we catches theft but after knew about camera theft wears mask on their face after they do robbery.
According to my point of view, use of camera and tracking device ,people does their work in discipline and they always remember their rules and regulation but more use of that device some time people feels irritate and few time people being monitored by someone and they do not know about that but advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'so', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.318584070796 0.247107548796 129% => OK
Verbs: 0.153392330383 0.15552993741 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.070796460177 0.0946569551029 75% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0412979351032 0.0501201869031 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0501474926254 0.0437536398559 115% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117994100295 0.122223957237 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0442477876106 0.0403219363162 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50614722073 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0117994100295 0.0326786765898 36% => More infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0530973451327 0.0861751148067 62% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0214082191602 0% => More modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0119246538136 0% => More subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, whom, Whose, That.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1897.0 1933.38276553 98% => OK
No of words: 304.0 316.052104208 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.24013157895 6.10592293882 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20519365927 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.394736842105 0.37474360046 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.279605263158 0.284197041944 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.194078947368 0.203843217982 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108552631579 0.137313986986 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50614722073 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.560935902166 94% => OK
Word variations: 53.7297094859 60.7401812628 88% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0911823647 75% => OK
Sentence length: 25.3333333333 20.7725350517 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.5538332786 49.5273876611 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.083333333 93.4120437189 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 15.2821509519 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.416666666667 0.594174754866 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01102204409 319% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 53.2938596491 49.1922392462 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.96385542169 1.69127372897 116% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237775589098 0.332604825255 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.144668242676 0.102734651613 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0650788928673 0.0668474354756 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.601984107775 0.534917948617 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.154816862359 0.148666948902 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117186859305 0.13441755203 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535618337482 0.0742828286743 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.359917774184 0.324241079732 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.106702732648 0.0640056729886 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174319975708 0.22793763319 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519163853225 0.0582452615562 89% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41883767535 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.88977955912 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.60220440882 154% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.00200400802 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.493987976 105% => OK
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 5.5 Out of 9