People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example: new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities? You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
Nowadays people, of different ages, from different social classes are willing to attend colleges and universities for gaining knowleges or seeking of new experience. Education makes people’s selfassesment higher and helps to provide new ideas into the life.
Lately, I’ve read the story about new chief of google. It’s simple Indian man, who was a ‘book warm’ in his youth, who worked hard through all his life and achieved top of his career. His life was all about studying in school, university and self-studying, but he did it, he inspires me. This instance shows that self-development and dream in your had can do a lot, can make you great and powerful person.
Another powerful argument to attend college and university is possibilities that are open in front of you after graduation. There is no bigger blessing then having a chance to help other people no matter in what field of life. In my family my future profession was an apple of discord. My mother tried to convince me that being a doctor is to hard not only physically, but although emotionally, but my grandmother support me in my decision and now I am exciting to have chance to help people.
University is the place where everyone can find something for themselves. Perhaps sometimes it brings not very happy experience, but in the end you understand that you have learned a lot passing through it. Another great thing about college and university is meeting new people, you can find a friend for life there, and only because of it it’s worth it.
To summarise, people attend colleges and universities from different reasons, some for career growing, some to arrive to the lives calling and some just to feel something new, to conquer new adventure.
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- People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example: new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities? You should give reasons for your answer using your own 70
It’s simple Indian man
It’s a simple Indian man
is possibilities that are open in front of you
is the possibilities that are open in front of you
There is no bigger blessing then having a chance
There is no bigger blessing than having a chance
being a doctor is to hard
being a doctor is hard
Sentence: My mother tried to convince me that being a doctor is to hard not only physically, but although emotionally, but my grandmother support me in my decision and now I am exciting to have chance to help people.
Description: The fragment grandmother support me is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace support with verb, past tense
Sentence: Nowadays people, of different ages, from different social classes are willing to attend colleges and universities for gaining knowleges or seeking of new experience.
Error: knowleges Suggestion: knowledge
Sentence: Education makes people's selfassesment higher and helps to provide new ideas into the life.
Error: selfassesment Suggestion: self assessment
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