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Sentence: School is like a simulative society, students here learn how to be a good person and how to work with other people.
Error: simulative Suggestion: No alternate word
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 286 350
No. of Characters: 1287 1500
No. of Different Words: 151 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.112 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.5 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.325 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 87 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 58 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 31 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.458 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.365 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.58 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.069 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5