The table shows the percentage of very good rated by first year students

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The table shows the percentage of very good rated by first year students.

The table chart reflects the course satisfaction of freshmen towards the subjects of economics, law and commerce in varies aspects.

In terms of economics, 95% of the students rate the factor of teaching as “very good”, a same level in that of commerce. And the figure for tutor is 90%, still the highest among the three, although the percentage bottoms at 59% only when students rating pre-course information. As for law, about 80% students show satisfaction when rating the other resources, sharing the similar popularity with that of commerce, which is 81%. The teaching, tutor, and resource...

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a same level
the same level

in varies aspects
in various aspects

And the figure for tutor is 90%, still the highest among the three
Description: 'three' refers to what? why it is the highest one?

when students rating pre-course information
when students are rating pre-course information

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Didn't describe the tables clearly.

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 10
No. of Words: 176 200
No. of Characters: 861 1000
No. of Different Words: 96 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.642 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.892 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.823 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 61 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 50 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.143 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.055 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.483 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.67 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.099 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4