Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world has been increasing. Why this has happened and how to deal with this problem?
Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world has been increasing. Why this has happened and how to deal with this problem? Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world has been increasing. Why this has happened and how to deal with this problem? Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world has been increasing. Why this has happened and how to deal with this problem? Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world has been increasing. Why this has happened and how to deal with this problem? Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world has been increasing. Why this has happened and how to deal with this problem? Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world has been increasing. Why this has happened and how to deal with this problem? Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world has been increasing. Why this has happened and how to deal with this problem? Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world has been increasing. Why this has happened and how to deal with this problem? Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world has been increasing. Why this has happened and how to deal with this problem?
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Sentence: Education can provide them with oppoirtunities to increase competitivenes and make a decent living.
Error: oppoirtunities Suggestion: opportunities
Error: competitivenes Suggestion: No alternate word
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No. of Words: 233 350
Minimum 250 words wanted.
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Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 233 350
No. of Characters: 1198 1500
No. of Different Words: 149 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.907 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.142 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.936 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 90 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.533 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.226 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.297 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.502 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.045 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5