Should Parents encourage their Children to play outdoor sports instead of Computer games? Do you agree or Disagree?

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Should Parents encourage their Children to play outdoor sports instead of Computer games? Do you agree or Disagree?

Nowadays, many children are not showing interest on outdoor activities and spending most of the their leisure time by playing amazing games in front of a computer or smart phone. Though youngsters could gain imagination and analyzing skills by playing computer games, parents should guide children to participate actively on physical activities to improve their immunity.

To begin with, playing games require lot of patience and need to think always on the next step in advance. This definitely helps children to improve their logical thinking and patience. Moreover, in this competitive world, ch...

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