Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time.
Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
In this contemporary world, education plays a significant role in deciding a child’s career. However, some parents insist their kids to engage with hobbies that educate them further, by stating that other forms of entertainment are futile. From my perspective, I opine that it is not recommended for young people to engage with educating leisure activities all the time. This essay analyses both the point of view.
In striking contrast to my point of view, some people argue that recreational activities should teach something meaningful to the pupils along with their full-time academic educati...
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school goers should not only study their subjects, but also they must spend some time in extra-curricular activities
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 394 350
No. of Characters: 1991 1500
No. of Different Words: 216 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.455 4.7
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