Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The relative importance of following local customs and welcoming cultural differences is a frequent topic for discussion when people try to explain the proper behavior of visitors when come to other counties. However, both views need to be examined before commenting on a final decision. My inclination is argued further.

Focusing on the first point it can be said that following local behavior is a kind of respect concerning on other counties’ culture. Since visitors and local people may develop different attitudes towards life, different rules may come into being. For example, people in Un...

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