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some people say that school years are the best years in their lives. Do you agree or disagree with given statement?
The role of school to nourish childern with overall development is exceptional. Presently, it has been extremely debatable whether school years are excellent years where one can develop skills to make life prosperous and have fun and frolic with friends than other periods of life or not. Here, I would like to accord with given statement firmly.
There are multifarious points to shore up my point of view. First and foremost, school plays a terrific role to make children creative, competitive, goal oriented and skillful. For example, students learns to create new ideas and will power to achiev...
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Sentence: The role of school to nourish childern with overall development is exceptional.
Error: childern Suggestion: children
Sentence: Moreover,Teachers install spirit of emulation, moral ethics and etiquettes through building examples of prominent persons anf telling inspirational stories to make them noble and successful characters.
Error: anf Suggestion: and
Sentence: Consequently, they have more opporrunities and time to relish with their friends during school years.
Error: opporrunities Suggestion: opportunities
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No. of Words: 276 350
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 276 350
No. of Characters: 1469 1500
No. of Different Words: 188 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.076 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.322 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.876 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 115 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 83 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.4 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.135 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.3 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.563 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.067 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5