Some people think that children should learn to obey and do as parents and teachers say. Others think that this kind of upbringing will not prepare our children for real life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is universally acknowledged that "today's children are the leaders of tomorrow." Presently, some people assert that being obedient to parents and teachers is lucrative for overall development of children. By contrast, it is believed to be perilous for juveniles as far as real life scenario is concerned. Here, I would like to account for both sides with my own perception.
There are numerous points to shore up the former view. First and foremost, parents have strong intimacy, mutual understanding and emotional attachment with their children. Therefore, they always nourish their juveniles...
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