Some people think that it is beneficial for students to go to private schools, but other people think that it can have a negative effect. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinions.
Accompanying with the fascinating development of the education systems, private schools are boosting through the past few decades. Some argue that attending private schools benefit students as a whole whereas others hold opposite opinions. Personally, I believe that there are more negative impacts than positive ones brought by private schools.
Admittedly, such schools have their competitive advantages. To be specific, private schools are usually referred as the birth places for social elites, because they are able to provide better facilities, such as school infrastructures, equipment and s...
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