Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(Smaple_Misnariah)

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Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?(Smaple_Misnariah)

In today's world, there has been a tremendous change on different gender roles. Comparing to the past, recently, women tend to run a job which was previously only hold by men like the army, the navy or the air force. However, there is a controversial premise regarding to this condition as although some people believe that female should not be prohibited for this, the other tend to have the opposite opinion. In my personal point of view, I agree with the former statement based on some reasons.

To begin with, it should be understood that both men and women were born in the same physical power...

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