When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
I totally disagree with this statement that modren technology distory our traditional skill and way of life.
First of all i will explain the advantages of modren technology.Today modren technology is the main part of our life,because in every field of life we can use technology.For example in our industries the use of mechines and robots make our work eaiser and effection ,and the other fields like medical sports aducation and....etc. we will use the technology for better work .
In the past peoples were die with dangerous disease ,because they have no proper madicine and no proper medical machines like X-RAY machine,with the help of X-RAY machine we can see the inner parts of humain body.other example is blood pressure machine.
In our education sector technology make our study eassy and effective.For example with the help of internet we can get more information about our study and downloads books which is not available in market,and we can online classes on internet. I think modren technology is the modren face of our traditional skill and the way of life.
In the past peoples use pigeons for deliver messages but nowaday we can use internet for sending message. I short my own personal belief that technology can only change our traditional skills,not to destroy our skill and the way of life.Technology make our life more safe and happier.
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modren technology distory our traditional skill and way of life
modren technology destroys our traditional skills and ways of life
make our work eaiser and effection
make our work eaiser and effective
Sentence: In the past peoples were die with dangerous disease ,because they have no proper madicine and no proper medical machines like X-RAY machine,with the help of X-RAY machine we can see the inner parts of humain body.other example is blood pressure machine.
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Sentence: In our education sector technology make our study eassy and effective.For example with the help of internet we can get more information about our study and downloads books which is not available in market,and we can online classes on internet.
Description: The fragment technology make our is rare
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Technology make our life more safe and happier.
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Sentence: I totally disagree with this statement that modren technology distory our traditional skill and way of life.
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Error: modren Suggestion: modern
Sentence: First of all i will explain the advantages of modren technology.Today modren technology is the main part of our life,because in every field of life we can use technology.For example in our industries the use of mechines and robots make our work eaiser and effection ,and the other fields like medical sports aducation and....etc. we will use the technology for better work .
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Error: mechines Suggestion: machines
Error: aducation Suggestion: education
Error: eaiser Suggestion: easier
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Error: modren Suggestion: modern
Sentence: In the past peoples were die with dangerous disease ,because they have no proper madicine and no proper medical machines like X-RAY machine,with the help of X-RAY machine we can see the inner parts of humain body.other example is blood pressure machine.
Error: humain Suggestion: human
Error: madicine Suggestion: medicine
Sentence: In our education sector technology make our study eassy and effective.For example with the help of internet we can get more information about our study and downloads books which is not available in market,and we can online classes on internet.
Error: eassy Suggestion: easy
Sentence: I think modren technology is the modren face of our traditional skill and the way of life.
Error: modren Suggestion: modern
Sentence: In the past peoples use pigeons for deliver messages but nowaday we can use internet for sending message.
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 13 2
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 235 350
No. of Characters: 1110 1500
No. of Different Words: 117 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.915 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.723 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.449 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 77 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 58 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 33.571 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 16.927 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.531 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.839 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.232 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5