1 The best way to understand other cultures is to work for a multinational organisation To what extent do you agree or disagree

Due to globalization more and more people want to understand various nations culture. Consequently, a number of individuals believe that the best way to understand this culture is they can do job in gigantic multinational company. I, however, partially disagree with this statement.

It is irrefutable that working in multinational company helps people to understand various culture due to the fact there are numerous people who work in multinational company and that people come from the various cultures. Consequently, by knowing them gradually they can understand the various culture. For example a man who works in a company like Google, and he comes from the various background. Consequently, to deal with office people he tufts to understand language and culture or learn various culture. Thus, it helps them to understand various culture.

However, it is not only one good way to understand various culture. There are a number of another way to understand various cultures. The first and foremost is people can visit the nation and spending time with local people, consequently it to explore the new knowledge. Along with his people can hire a professional to tour to explain about other culture. It is also possible to do voluntary work with organization and charities that work in other countries, something that would mean you meet a mix of people rather than merely Those who work in companies.

To conclude, although joining multinational company for knowing new culture is not a bad way, there are a number of another good way to acquire information about various culture.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, so, thus, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20622568093 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97228386553 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470817120623 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8190941763 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5714285714 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259346440116 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957628956972 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636701453403 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172918207068 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221101600371 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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