1. It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media. What do you think it is the reason for a growth in the rate of juvenile crime? What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation?
It is true that the violence in the media could lead to an increase in the rate of youth crimes. There could be several reasons why this is the case, and I believe that there are some solutions that the governments and individuals could take to resolve the issue.
There are contributing factors why the rate of juvenile crime is increasing because of violence in the media. Firstly, people could share provoking information or articles which stigmatize the others when they could not reach a compromise since people could not take responsibility for what they are doing, they would commit crime in the society. For example, on social network sites like Facebook or Zalo, members share information with each other, some people use it to study, while the others would use these sites to encourage children commit crime or share provoking posts. Secondly, citizens have freedom of speech, so they could post an article that attract viewers and readers, this article could lead to violence when they have different standpoints.
In my view, there are some ways to prevent the problems described above. In terms of education, the police should be in close contact with schools, so if there is violence in school, people can contact police for help and focus on young people who have dropped out of schools. Another solution that could be taken by the governments is that fines are used as punishment for minor crimes, but if the crime is more serious, prison is the most common punishment. Although being kept in prison is an effective way to solve the problem, I believe teenagers who are prone o commit crime when they are released from prison should be sent to educational schools.
In conclusion, there are various measures that people could take to overcome the difficulties and remedy the situation in order to protect life of people, especially teenagers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98722044728 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54195069501 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5303514377 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1523409383 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.909090909 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4545454545 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194261699257 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815889755008 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673649637084 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103423374884 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478042136767 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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