Development plays a vital role in the life of a person. The Main benefit of living in big cities is to get all the basic necessities of Life. People attracts towards big cities as it has Developed roads, good infrastructure, uninterrupted water and electricity supply. People get better transport facilities and Medical helps in urban areas rather than rural areas. In urban areas, we can easily find that toilets on roads as opposed to rural areas. In any emergency, we can easily get medical help as there are various hospitals and institutions has already been made in urban areas, not in rural areas. In urban areas, Per capita income is far better than the people of rural areas. As Education Institutions and Schools are well developed in urban areas, People can earn better by doing jobs in IT Sector, MNC's, Corporate Firms etc. but education is neglected in rural areas, the result in which people can’t earn much money and bound to live the same economical life every day. The job seeker can’t get the job easily in rural areas and the business man can’t successfully run his business as he doesn't have business skills like urban people.
In order to improve the life of rural area, Many Organizations, Government, Academics, Nonprofit organization should come forward and provide financial support to the people. Government should take necessary steps to provide the basic facilities to the people like electricity & water supply, medical & transport facilities etc. On the other hand, People should also take initiative to keep the areas neat & clean, maintain the security, encourage people to educate their children and help the organization by co-operating with them.
If all these steps will be taken in order, we hope that soon the problem of rural areas will get resolve. People live the same life in rural areas as they live in urban areas.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... living in big cities is to get all the basic necessities of Life. People attracts towards big ci...
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Line 1, column 606, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ade in urban areas, not in rural areas. In urban areas, Per capita income is far b...
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Line 1, column 962, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...n much money and bound to live the same economical life every day. The job seeker can’t ge...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l areas as they live in urban areas.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.299719887955 0.247107183377 121% => OK
Verbs: 0.145658263305 0.155533422707 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106442577031 0.0946595960268 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0364145658263 0.0501214627716 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0252100840336 0.0437548338989 58% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112044817927 0.122226691241 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0252100840336 0.0403226058552 63% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65729646253 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0252100840336 0.0326793684256 77% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0700280112045 0.0861772015684 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0224089635854 0.021408717616 105% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00280112044818 0.011925033212 23% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1894.0 1933.35771543 98% => OK
No of words: 315.0 316.048096192 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0126984127 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.352380952381 0.374742101984 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.225396825397 0.28420135186 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142857142857 0.203846283523 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.120634920635 0.137316102897 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65729646253 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.037074148 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511111111111 0.56093040696 91% => OK
Word variations: 52.1286046127 60.7387585426 86% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9498932866 49.517814964 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.266666667 127.492653851 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.814263465372 49% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38877755511 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 43.5396825397 49.1944974215 89% => OK
Elegance: 2.10810810811 1.69124875643 125% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.481976418531 0.332605444948 145% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.157918592883 0.102741220458 154% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0732313155851 0.0668466124924 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.565090264601 0.534860350844 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.149801031655 0.148594505496 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211125163266 0.134430193775 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624792955653 0.0742795772207 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.276863151609 0.324371583561 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0683342468624 0.0638462369009 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.341541885476 0.228012699653 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883179547689 0.058150111329 152% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 5.90881763527 203% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 6.0 Out of 9