In the cycle of life, people would be faced with a bad situation which lets that people should confirm with the big heart with those conditions. However, others believe that there is much opportunity to tackle a bad situation to be a good condition. I think people should consider both of them because those situations are part of life. This essay will explain from both perspectives.
To begin with, people should agree from their bad life such as unsatisfactory jobs and a low salary. Life is just like a wheel, sometimes people should start from the bottom, then it leads people to take more experience so that people can survive and, finally, achieve the top. To keep its motivation in their mind, they can compare their life with other people which take more worst position than it's life so that people will feel blessed to confirm the situation that bring them to be meaningful and valuable.
On the other hand, life is changing when people can push their ambition to achieve the goal. By taking this perception, at this time, their life will be more active and productive due to the fact that people are occupied with full of motivation to improve their life and move-out from a bad situation. For instance, the story of Mr. Joko Widodo, the first person in Indonesia, took the journey of his life which was started at the bottom. He was born in a farmer family who are not rich. However, his life has much of motivation so that, currently, He can be the president of Indonesia which is the top position of his career.
In conclusion, people should satisfy their condition although it is a hard condition. However, they can change their life as long as people have a big dream which is supported by keeping active, productive, and motivated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'worst' (without 'more') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: worst
...their life with other people which take more worst position than its life so that people w...
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Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'more the worst'.
Suggestion: more the worst
...their life with other people which take more worst position than its life so that people w...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, so, then, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72638436482 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46670364912 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517915309446 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8953529844 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.642857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113279597207 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499313734816 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436967930228 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075506430589 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331903429952 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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