2. Some people believe that song lyrics which glorify violence and criminal lifestyles should be banned. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of such a ban
It is said that prohibiting song lyrics that contain violence and criminal is considered the right action. However, everything has two sides, and focusing on only one side might lead to public disorder or even worse because we are living in the modern world with a variety of people (baby boomer to and generation-z).
Some part of the public holds the strong belief that prohibiting any activity that gives the wrong impression or message to the community is the mere way to solve the issue (crime and violence). Nevertheless, if it is not the root cause of the issue, the solution cannot be fully solved. On the other hand, advertising the public that the harsh actions are considered to be normal might become one of the reasons why real-life crime and violence is occurring. For example, teenagers are easy to get involved in the wrong action because of their natural behavior that exemplifies by their community especially, from the social influencers namely singers.
Secondly, banning is controversial action that breaking the common rule of modern society because we are living in an era of respecting human rights is considered a must-have attitude of the individual. Instead of taking corrective action that has already happened, taking the right amount of preventive action is the solution of modern society. For instance, strengthening the rules or increasing the penalty might decrease the crime rate.
In conclusion, prohibiting might be the one type of solution for preventing the crime, yet neither it is not the right solution in this modern world which respects human right nor it is not the root cause.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05597014925 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73916942157 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548507462687 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.3260410802 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.5 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0965474932844 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407590904716 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470352155549 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585456232237 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284706791826 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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