Nowadays, more and more people start to aware of the impact on their lives caused by the invention of computers and the Internet. Without the Internet, the computers can indeed help people live a more effective life. However, in modern society, digital devices can be the origin of pressure. In my opinion, the computers and the Internet are the double-edged swords to our society.
One of the beneficial effect caused by computers is reducing the cost of communication. Communicating through computers help not only private relationships but also the cooperation of companies. The staffs can discuss their project without seeing each other, and the invention of email allows them to save the conveying time that used to spend while sending the traditional mail. Also, the invention of computers also leads to telecommuting, which prevents many people from the terrible traffic jams at peak time. The computers are not only beneficial to business, but also play a critical role in other fields such as military and medical. Thus, computers have made our living quality better.
However, the negative effects caused by computers cannot be ignored. First of all, many people had lost their jobs after the invention of computers. In the past, society needs lots of human resources to process documents or complete jobs. The computers had been applied to many jobs, such as the bank teller and the service center, forcing people to fit in the rapidly changing society by learning new skills continuously. Secondly, the usage of computers and the Internet lead to the vague boundary between job and private life. Due to the convenience of communicating by digital devices, the companies are able to give out task to employees even during the holidays. As a result, computers had changed our lives dramatically and made people stressful.
In conclusion, although I believe the computers had made our lives better and we cannot live without them, we still need to be aware of the negative effects which may cause by the trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11144578313 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72820910292 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545180722892 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8406161016 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2777777778 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238354907803 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811973264617 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066426619683 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142211698317 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533302270994 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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