9. Pollution and other environmental problems are resulting from a country's developing and becoming richer, so some think this cannot be avoided. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Environment related issues, particularly pollution are headache to governments of different countries, as they are consequence of a nation’s prosperity. Therefore, a great number of people believe that they are unavoidable and I personally totally agree with that opinion.
First of all, everything has its own price and improvement of a country is not an exception. Human all want to possess more wealth and the only way to achieve that is to create more value for the society through manufacturing commodities. As a result, factories, where goods are produced to serve mankind, are built to help people reach the dream; nevertheless, emissions and liquid waste from the process is inevitable.
Secondly, increasing at rocket speed population on the Earth with higher standard of living makes factory building essential. Since human are no longer in the Stone Age, when people’s demands are just basic as clothes for warmth and food to prevent themselves from starvation, people’s need these days has expanded in both quality and quantity. This development results in greater demand for basic goods as well as sophistication of goods’ quality traded and people cannot create all objects manually anymore.
Opponents of factories being built to serve human’s needs may argue that they are damaging our planet in other method beside release pollutants, as cutting down trees to pave the way for building workshops also leads to deforestation. However, the increasing population alone has already been a significant factor of this issue, since people ask for land to build shelters, not to mention that they crave larger space for their house gradually.
In conclusion, though environment problems are matter that people all want to stay away, I believe that environment problems cannot be avoided if a nation wants to make progress in development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43686006826 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01118680563 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638225255973 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.5029481798 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.818181818 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3636363636 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100914118674 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364851242748 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292786566972 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0545537994788 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176798301808 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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