achieving personal happiness, our relationships with family, friends,
and colleagues are more important than work and wealth. Do you agree or disagree
n modern times, the issue of achieving personal happiness has become matter for discussion. While it can argued that our relationships with friends and family is the best way for achieving personal happiness, another opinion is that work and wealth is ultimately superior. In this essay will examine both sides of the argument and provide my overall opinion.
On one hand, people`s inclination towards achieving happiness by strengthen relationships can be supported by two reasons. Firstly, they perhaps ask this question; what the value of wealth without satisfied family? Secondly, undoubtedly building strong relationships with surroundings come at top of person`s priority so that social workers recommend that relationships are more important than wealth and work. Thus, relationship is indisputably appropriate way for gaining happiness.
On the other hand, vast majority of people believe that work and wealth is one the best ways for achieving happiness. To illustrate, if the figure have satisfaction job with high salary, irrefutably he will be happy because there is no justification for sadness. In addition, wealthy man will spend money to strengthen his relationships in the society. As an example, Alwaleed bin Talal has affluence of money, but he doesn't complain from sadness instead he always appear thrilled and happy.
In conclusion, achieving happiness by work or strong relationships is a topic which raises strong passions on both sides of the argument. having considered both sides of this argument, l would argue that wealth and work is the best way
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5406504065 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07251466305 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0516990483 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.846153846 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269282843309 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927894236336 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858925116506 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166522602944 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661423672986 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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