Movies are considered to be a great source of entertainment. These calls under different categories like romantic, comedy, action, patriotic, et cetera. Movie preferences are further linked to different age groups. Youngsters prefer to watch action movies. According to some people, such movies are responsible for the inclination in bad driving skills among younglings, which leads to accidents. I completely agree with the former statement and I have given my reasons for it in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Predominantly, there is an inclination in the number of car accidents in which most of the drivers are younglings and accidents generally occur due to their bad driving skills. These bad skills are further linked to to their encouragement from the action films. In action movies, there are certain actions performed by the experts like car racing bike racing but all these are under the supervision. But such actions influence the young people in their real lives. They tend to perform the same car chasing activities on the roads which often lead to accidents causing deaths.
Young people needs to be very careful while driving. Firstly, the driving skills of the younglings should be improved by giving them proper driving lessons. Moreover, the parents should make them understand the difference between real life and reel life and ask them not to perform such stunts. Also, youngsters should be encouraged to value the life of themselves as well as other people. In addition, government should organise regular seminars for the youngsters awareing them about the rules and regulations of the driving.
In conclusion, life of a person is is very precious. Youngsters should not memorize and perform the stunts which can make someone to lose his life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27208480565 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77862567716 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565371024735 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8554064915 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8888888889 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7222222222 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232742660776 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664664680441 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501784884068 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118527922622 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925271486539 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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