Dear Editor,
Myself Cris, student of 2nd year commerce batch, WGS college, would like to draw your attention on ongoing daily affairs of cafeteria. Reason why, my observation matter to you a lot as i am regular goer of cafeteria and buys most of my meal from there.
First of all, what makes this cafeteria better than other one that is its ambiance. Different age groups students as well as faculty come to have their food there which make student, teacher relation very peaceful.
However, currently, i have noticed cafeteria owner is compromising with food quality and hygiene standards which might lead to health issues in campus. Old fruits, rotten breads and over use of oily food options are few examples.
In my opinion, this has to stop on immediate effect and to control this situation, college should assign an quality check officer who must visit cafeteria on regular and discreet basis. If necessary, fines should be imposed to overcome the scenario too.
Looking forward for your actions.
Singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, well, as to, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02958579882 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42340743785 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.781065088757 0.622605031667 125% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6981508122 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4444444444 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 4.34317383033 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136247339147 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465160088141 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336539784231 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610619479651 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332997597126 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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