The 21st century has revolutionized the world in unimaginable ways; turning the relatively aloof world into a well connected social village. It has given people ways to remain connected and informed. Recent changes in the world have made it almost impossible to survive without the use of the latest technologies. Mobile Phones are one of such devices that have changed our lives forever. With perks and privileges come downside to everything. Let us delve into these aspects of mobile phones:
This was Bill Gate's who had predicted pretty much earlier that the world would be connected by the wallet laptops soon. Now we see how swiftly his thoughts became true. Today everyone carries a small world in his pocket called a smartphone the advantages of which are infinite. Calling your friends and family when missing them, to texting each other for immediate talks for a few of the early benefits phones offered during earlier times. Since came the smartphones in the market our lives have been revamped.
Don't know the way to someplace? Global positioning system and Google Maps are there to help you, Craving for some delicious feast? Pull out your smartphone and order whatever you want, No transport available at your home for you granny? Not at all an issue just grab your phone and send the vehicle using an appropriate app, Are you in doldrums for having missed an episode of your favorite season? Use Netlfix using your phone and chill, Want to increase your earning? There is a whole social media industry for you that you can operate using your phone. Alarm clock, smart wallet, Music, Memo Notes, Calculator, Flash Lights what not and whatnot. All these things have made our lives smooth and relaxed besides saving a lot of our time. The benefits of mobile phones are so infinite that they can not be jotted down to a single piece of paper.
All these benefits come with a cost. Today the greatest distraction to achieving our goals are these smartphones. We spend most of our time procrastinating on these forgetting the importance of time. Our generation has become somewhat lazy lacking the energy and agility youth used to have. The trend of sports has been dying in the youth. Youth of today are struggling to achieve their goals because of their time spent on smartphones
Tailpiece: Mobile phones are the basic necessity of life in current times. Their use must be tailored with effective time management to make our lives efficient and successful.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 445, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...privileges come downside to everything. Lets delve into these aspects of mobile phon...
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Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ts phones offered during earlier times. Since came the smartphones in the market our ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...e market our lives have been revamped. Dont know the way to someplace? Global posit...
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Line 4, column 237, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: Now
... available at your home for you granny? No at all an issue just grab your phone an...
^^
Line 4, column 794, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...mobile phones are so infinite that they cant be jotted down to a single piece of pap...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2056.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94230769231 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47707219302 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 176.041082164 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600961538462 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.391826263 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0769230769 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.807692307692 7.06120827912 11% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212875551631 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551701383082 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071853301374 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125024917207 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446687138009 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 445, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...privileges come downside to everything. Lets delve into these aspects of mobile phon...
^^^^
Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ts phones offered during earlier times. Since came the smartphones in the market our ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...e market our lives have been revamped. Dont know the way to someplace? Global posit...
^^^^
Line 4, column 237, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: Now
... available at your home for you granny? No at all an issue just grab your phone an...
^^
Line 4, column 794, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...mobile phones are so infinite that they cant be jotted down to a single piece of pap...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2056.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94230769231 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47707219302 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 176.041082164 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600961538462 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.391826263 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0769230769 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.807692307692 7.06120827912 11% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212875551631 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551701383082 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071853301374 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125024917207 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446687138009 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.