In today’s world, mobile phones have become a basic necessity to all of us. In this essay, I will outline some of the benefits and drawbacks of using a mobile phone.
Firstly, the important advantage of using a mobile phone is ease of communication. For example, we can connect to our loved ones through voice or video calls who live at any part of the world and, at any instant of time. Also, the other benefit of using a mobile phone is, every sort of work can be one within few minutes. For instance, online shopping, banking, ordering food, paying bills has become just a matter of minutes. So, life can become easier by using a mobile phone.
On the other hand, as we know every coin has two sides, there are certain drawbacks of using mobile phone. Firstly, using a mobile phone can result in addiction. Many psychological studies have shown that, phone addiction is the major problem faced by youth nowadays and they are socially distracted from the people. Secondly, these gadgets can cause certain relationship problems. For example, now many people prefer talking on only phones, resulting in lack of real talks between individuals. Therefore, these are some of the drawbacks of using a mobile phone.
On a final note, I strongly consider that the advantages of using a mobile phone outweigh the disadvantages, however, these gadgets must be used appropriately for a certain period of time and with caution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...tween individuals. Therefore, these are some of the drawbacks of using a mobile phone. On ...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ust be used appropriately for a certain period of time and with caution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86419753086 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60743026968 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59670781893 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8676934429 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4285714286 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267969431561 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107745034217 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072002599667 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172068643178 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338598112854 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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