The advantages and disavantages of cellphone
Thanks to the invention of cell phones, people can perform their tasks more effectively in a shorter period. However, they may be detrimental if they are overused. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of the excessive use of smartphones.
On the one hand, there are several advantages that can be linked to the widespread use of mobile phones. Firstly, the emergence of smartphones enables people to get easier access to available social media applications such as Facebook, Instagram, and so on. People can send voice messages or make video calls from a vastly far distance. Besides, people can keep themselves updated about their beloved ones by seeing their new posts when hearing notification sounds from the phones. Another advantage is convenience in e-commerce. It brings businesses and customers together. There are some online shopping applications namely Shoppee, Tiki, Lazada which are popular among people. Business owners can upload and put their products up for sale on these platforms. Clients can order goods in the comfort of their homes and get them delivered to their places.
On the other hand, extra use of cell phones can be harmful to some extent. First and foremost is the exploitation of data. People tend to store their personal information on their phones, yet it can result in serious effects if their phones are hacked. For example, if the user installs applications supported by a bank, the hacker may steal the passwords of the user’s account and take away all the money. Secondly, overusing mobile phones may lead to a decline in physical interaction. Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that in gatherings, people often look at the screens for the most part instead of talking to each other. Even in family reunions, the family members surf the Internet rather than interact with one another. Once I hung out with my friends in a coffee shop, I was quite surprised when seeing a family of four people playing with their phones without caring about other people in their family. This might erode the relationships of people within the family.
In sum, mobile phones offer us an abundance of perks. Cell phones themselves can be helpful and convenient to some people but can be an addiction to other people. Therefore, people should make judicious use of smartphones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07310704961 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65584151015 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587467362924 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2248464861 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9583333333 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9583333333 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0230326529199 0.244688304435 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0112263470129 0.084324248473 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038661344176 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0125610866753 0.151304729494 8% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217564403199 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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