Advertisements helps people to buy wisely, on the other hand, some people think that advertisements misguide the people. With which viewpoint do you agree and why?
Society has been regularly transformed as a natural part of evolution, ever since the dawn of civilisation. There are plethora's of positive and negative outcomes of a change of such a magnitude. It has been observed that there are people of different opinions about advertising sector. Some opine that advertisements are useful while others find them misleading. As advertisements are very useful form of information about products and services, this essay will elaborate same in subsequent paragraph.
To embark with, the root cause behind the given topic at hand is Media influence. Availability of different platforms for promotion and marketing made it possible to reach potential customers. Emergences of increased competition lead competitors to display their product by each and every possible medium. The prime benefit of commercials is to keep people informed about latest products and services available in market. It helps this consumerist society to choose products as per their needs and wants. In this technological world, one cannot imagine human surroundings without promotions as they play crucial role to drive customers to buy commodities. For instance; wider variety of products information of price, quality, service, accessibility make it easy to formulate wiser choices.
Moving forth, although, products marketing and promotion add up to product’s price also as advertisements calls for huge amount of money to be invested in industry to reach prospective buyer. However, raised product prices lead to more tax collected at Government end. This leads to better infrastructure and facilities for citizens provided by ruling Government. This convincing argument contributes to maximum possible growth of economy of a nation. An interesting aspect is that, automatically, advertisements raise lifestyle of people and standard of living as informed; well educated and improved choices are made before buying any product or service. So it is crystal clear that merits of advertisements are far greater than demerits.
In my opinion, as saying goes – ‘Every garden has weeds’ but advantages of advertisements of products overshadow the disadvantages, so they help buyers to choose right products or services.
It can be concluded that it depends on us a rightful discrimination and wisely taken decisions would lead mankind towards a bright and bountiful future.
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| 2020-01-20 | Antima Sharma | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the latest'.
Suggestion: about the latest
... commercials is to keep people informed about latest products and services available in mark...
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Line 13, column 173, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...vantages, so they help buyers to choose right products or services. It can be c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2058.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6694214876 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21988958043 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64738292011 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.345011791 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.9 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.15 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150893661184 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443023948036 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533167008677 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766018361508 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506069968432 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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