Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. Discussion both view and give your opinion
nowadays, advertisement is a common part in society. There is belief that advertising have a positive effect on our lives wherease other believe that it has a negative effect. This essay aims to elaborate on the both side of the given viewpoints before my personal opinion is expounded.
It is entirely reasonable for some people to advocate to the idea that advertising is positive. Nowadays, with the developing of the internet and social media, the advertisement not only broadcasted in one country but also in the whole world. When the advertisement is displayed widely, the good will be more people known about it. This will make an opportunity for the product to export oversea. If the quality of the product is good, the revenue will increase and this can contribute to the uplifting of country's economy.
On the other spectrum, the people who advocate the idea that the advertising is a negative part also have strong grounds. The company only attend to the profit that the advertising brings. They more concentrate on the image of the product and the new technology or new method of the product than the its negative effect. For example, the advertising of fast food brand will undisplay how much calories in the dishes . They only show the images that stimulate the taste of the customer.
On the whole, while there are compelling agruments on both side of the debate. I subscribe to the view that advertising is positive part in light of its benefit in economy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, while, for example, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90039840637 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74657073341 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529880478088 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3325203131 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.0 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261286603006 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890385564886 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745652905279 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169242062462 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488614577074 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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