advertising has a major role in strategy of sales of compagnies because it make its products more attractive and push people subconsciously buy it; therefore eraning over profit
the majority of consumer search to reduce their charges ; they prefer to buy in quantity and leave out that the quality it is important if they want preserve the product for a long periode .some companies deceive people by their promotion ; for instance if you buy two terms the third one will be free or you benefice from a discount ;thus the consumer think it is a oppurtunity to decrease his fees. it is abviously that reducing prices means a luck of quality ; some people chose to buy in quantity to stock the products and avoid to do shopping many time but he forget that product maybe has a close expiration date then the consumer will undergone a loss instead saving money and to be careful .in this case the reputation of the compagny threatened.
all compagnies should carefully choseits strategies of advertising and encourages people to buy in quantity and quality .consumer should be aware of his decision specially when that concern his consumption
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: jeffzhou
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Advertising
advertising has a major role in strategy of sales o...
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Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...ategy of sales of compagnies because it make its products more attractive and push p...
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Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly buy it; therefore eraning over profit the majority of consumer search to reduc...
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Line 2, column 189, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... preserve the product for a long periode .some companies deceive people by their p...
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Line 2, column 366, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...discount ;thus the consumer think it is a oppurtunity to decrease his fees. it is...
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Line 2, column 402, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... is a oppurtunity to decrease his fees. it is abviously that reducing prices means...
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Line 2, column 528, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid doing'.
Suggestion: avoid doing
...y in quantity to stock the products and avoid to do shopping many time but he forget that p...
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Line 2, column 549, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...k the products and avoid to do shopping many time but he forget that product maybe has a ...
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Line 2, column 566, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'forgets'.
Suggestion: forgets
...d avoid to do shopping many time but he forget that product maybe has a close expirati...
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Line 2, column 643, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'undergo' or 'be undergone'?
Suggestion: undergo; be undergone
... expiration date then the consumer will undergone a loss instead saving money and to be c...
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Line 2, column 698, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s instead saving money and to be careful .in this case the reputation of the compa...
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Line 2, column 743, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...this case the reputation of the compagny threatened. all compagnies should caref...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: All
...eputation of the compagny threatened. all compagnies should carefully choseits st...
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Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...es people to buy in quantity and quality .consumer should be aware of his decision...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, therefore, third, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 193.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9067357513 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73676341886 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632124352332 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.2975951904 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.165135128 49.4020404114 312% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 315.666666667 106.682146367 296% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.3333333333 20.7667163134 310% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.0 7.06120827912 283% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190779853258 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129175837343 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269406273467 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126538104524 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247077878619 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.9 13.0946893788 259% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.52 50.2224549098 13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.82 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.1190380762 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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