As you know, most of us want to choose a good job after we graduted. Some people choose a job or career that they love and others choose a job high salary. In my view point, I would choose a job or career that I really love than a job or career has the best salary.
First of all, I spend too much time finding my future job before I have a final exam. Therefor, I want to become a person who could do everything I enjoy. When I could do my enjoyable job, I have lots of happiness and confidence in my life. Every day, I am more likely to prosper in my career and also I have more positive energy. Moreover, I believe if I have many task, I will try to do without streess.
On the other hand, money is important in modern life. I do not deny it when our life more and more develop. Especially, because of covid-19 pandemic, my life need more money than. If I have a job or career that has the best salary the life maybe easier. Because I can buy some smart inventions to look after my family’s health better.
In summary, you should choose a job or career that you enjoy doing it. And also it brings you some advantages than you work because you can earn much money. If you really love your job or your career, you can get more good opportunities to have high salary in the future.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: nghiaho
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 361, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun task seems to be countable; consider using: 'many tasks'.
Suggestion: many tasks
...e energy. Moreover, I believe if I have many task, I will try to do without streess. On ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, in summary, you know, first of all, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.14682539683 5.12529762239 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24426075785 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503968253968 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.1843626303 49.4020404114 33% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.3125 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268211431098 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100539456574 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904405092318 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177665566579 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102962545932 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 13.0946893788 46% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 12.4159519038 52% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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