The age difference between the parents and children is increasing than it was in the past.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is argued that the difference in age between fathers and mothers and their children is more than the figure in the past. Despite the fact that older parents have a different mindset and need more care, they earn more and are more experienced.
The drawback of increased age difference in parents and their offsprings is that they have a different mindset than that of their sons and daughters. This is because technology is developing day by day. This leads to change the way young people think. For example, young people are more interested in learning from the internet as opposed to their parents' idea of going to schools and academies to learn. Additionally, aged parents are more likely to become ill and require more care. That is to say the more they age, the more they are prone to diseases. For instance, a study conducted in Manchester stated that more than half of the people present in a local nursing home had young children that could not take care of them.
Parents that are more aged than their sons and daughters earn more money. The reason is that they are doing jobs for a long time and have saved more money to fulfil the needs of their progeny. Furthermore, they are more experienced and can help their children in choosing their career. For example, my parents are much older than my friends' mothers and fathers and they asked me to become a Doctor. I am happy with ther decision and earning more than those who were my classmates in school.
In conclusion, although having more age difference between parents and progeny has its disadvantages, the fact that they can support their children financially and guide them better far outweighs the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79452054795 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49674210691 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489726027397 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7235458741 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227647872397 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919907276813 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896924620384 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172586366349 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397170112734 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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