It is commonly thought, that invention of vehicle was one of the important issue in our century and it has brought many benefits to our life. However, some people believe having a car is very important measure for reaching to convenience. Although, many people are disagree with this idea like me. As a matter of fact, there are some reasons that will support my opinion in following statement.
Nowadays, everybody might has ambitious of having an individual luxury car according their income that it would carry them to every place safe and sound without waiting for any public transportation. Nobody can not deny the convenient and comfortable life which it has brought for us but if we look to all around wisely we will see that it has had many disadvantages with advent to our planet.
Indeed, it is alternating our environment and ecosystem gradually. Moreover, with a huge amount of fuel and gas it is a big risk for ozone layer and global warming. Meanwhile, the significant factor for human's healthy is having fresh air, so these days this is a one of the substantial problem in many countries that they could not control it's production.
In sum up, I believe the transportation vehicles like cars are destroying to the foundation of healthy life factors. unless, The governments attempt to produce kind of vehicle according solar energy that it not only does not have any disadvantage but also helps people to have more convenient in their society.
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.others,however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 71
- What are the advantages and disadvantages for children of watching television? Discuss both sides. 61
- Agree/ disagree. the automobile is destroying our quality of life. 60
- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sport facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.Discuss both these views and give you 61
- Agree/ disagree. the automobile is destroying our quality of life. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nt measure for reaching to convenience. Although, many people are disagree with this ide...
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Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Unless
...the foundation of healthy life factors. unless, The governments attempt to produce kin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, kind of, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91935483871 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78957662973 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5897677086 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.909090909 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102450115621 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411317996046 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579818351239 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598319647528 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198439685967 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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