Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Many countries which have special circumstances in cultivation used to import some tropical crops from other countries using transportation facilities, such as airlines. While there are some positives in increase exports for local products, the prices could be one of the main drawbacks. This essay will discuss both positives and negatives in the following lines.
To begin with, export local products from the country to another have become easy nowadays <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-E1C61AC0E130ACE1E3A9FE91CA3406FA" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_3_1768" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: because of, for" data-pwa-suggestions="because of~for" data-pwa-dictionary-word="due to" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">due to</pwa> transportation facilities, as a result, it becomes much easier to find any tropical crops <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-DEE1620CEA2266AFAA8DB0651B0CA5F6" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2896" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Can you bring these together for clarity?" data-pwa-suggestions="whether or not if its seasons~if if its seasons" data-pwa-dictionary-word="whether if its seasons or not" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">whether if its seasons or not</pwa>. <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-E4504959406DC79BAA5D60DB720FD389" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_814" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: This" data-pwa-suggestions="This" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Moreover, this" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">Moreover, this</pwa> will help different countries to enhance their income rates. This is because they will export those products with high prices than local crops. A prime example, in Kuwait, they are focusing to import many fruits and vegetables because the difficulties of weather <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-38A3DC8662283D30526706017F28D669" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2699" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="conditions " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">conditions</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-38A3DC8662283D30526706017F28D669" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2699" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="conditions " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> </pwa>during a year. Hence, air transport encourage many countries to get what the market needs.
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-D71A17FD2E43149FAF883E59C139FB17" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_377" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: The" data-pwa-suggestions="The" data-pwa-dictionary-word="On the other hand, the" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">On the other hand, the</pwa> high cost of export product is considered <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-7749576AD00F294CE6FA7F447263FDB2" data-pwa-rule-id="CRFSR_ON_6" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible confused word" data-pwa-suggestions="one" data-pwa-dictionary-word="on" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">on</pwa> of the main disadvantages. This is because when the traders choose air transport to send their goods to another country, the cost of local crops will become more than the normal price. Therefore, the consumer will pay the differences. For instance, American citizens have to pay twice more to buy the fruit of avocado <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-8D85A8CAA30B22138E79360198FA946B" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1603" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="which is " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">which is </pwa>original from Pakistan.
This mean that the prices will be higher <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-04F10D286B593C8DCDA0C7C6EDE1C83C" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_3_1768" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: because of, for" data-pwa-suggestions="because of~for" data-pwa-dictionary-word="due to" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">due to</pwa> used airline services.
In conclusion, although the drawbacks of export local tropical crops, there are some positives for countries which is looking for <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-D6435BDC05B51BC5CD8149698298B8FB" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2016" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: improve" data-pwa-suggestions="improve" data-pwa-dictionary-word="ameliorate" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">ameliorate</pwa> their exportation to the countries which have problems in cultivation
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
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Line 3, column 834, Rule ID: IF_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
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Line 5, column 812, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to air'
Suggestion: to air
...This is because when the traders choose air transport to send their goods to anothe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4850.0 1615.20841683 300% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 432.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 11.2268518519 5.12529762239 219% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 13.3941698194 2.80592935109 477% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497685185185 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1315.8 506.74238477 260% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 3.0 1.60771543086 187% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 311.127639665 49.4020404114 630% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 346.428571429 106.682146367 325% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 30.8571428571 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0350580701381 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541445903186 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470121912977 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566441504762 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613306890137 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 46.9 13.0946893788 358% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -77.41 50.2224549098 -154% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.5 11.3001002004 279% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 48.45 12.4159519038 390% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 47.0 10.7795591182 436% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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