Aircrafts have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good trend, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Delivery by plane have been popular using to transportation crops to countries where are lacking of plants. it was considered as a good trend, but the reserve is also agreed by some people. My essay will demonstrate why many encourage this tendency while others believe that there are more useful methods for transferring.
In the first place, the aircraft is pondered as a transportation which has incredible speed. Thanks to the rapid increase of freight shipping industry, airliners are not only utilized for human travel but also transit foods and cargoes. this means when an area or religion suffer from famine or unsuitable weather for crops, transmission by airlines is one of the best solutions to tackle the problem. Additionally, advanced countries like Russia, china or America have numerous plans for trading and exporting purposes. For instance, china spends less attention on agriculture due to the convenience of an aircraft contributes are remarkable to solving this problem
In other ways, the airlines itself, contains several of demerits, especially environmental problems. The activations of engines in plane require tonnes of fuel like coals, oil, gas, thus it is the reason why people rejected using it for transmissions regardless of its favourable attributes. A research held in California reported that 27% of carbon dioxide released into atmosphere affect the air quality of numerous countries. this immense amount of toxic chemical substances emitted into the air is what needs to be concerned more than famine and crop losses.
In conclusion, aircraft contributes huge to freight transportation industry, but the backwoods of airline transit were showed thus it should not overused. Otherwise, the world will face a environmental degradation leading to various consequences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5017921147 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02267225775 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663082437276 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.882980486 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.076923077 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134677285666 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485196927475 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061627520603 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808700610993 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732417570109 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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