aircrafts have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. some people consider it a good trend but some people oppose it. discuss both views and give your own opinion
Aircraft transportation plays a vital role in modern life. Many believe that it is very beneficial. On the flip side, some say it is unnecessary and extravagant. The present essay seeks to discuss the advantages of aircraft transportation is emulate its disadvantages.
It often suggests that aircraft transportation is meritorious for two main reasons. For one thing, the market price is less likely to be influenced by seasonal factors. It can bring an adequate intake of nutrition for the general population throughout the year. Another thing is that exportation is one of the most critical parts of the national economy. As an illustration, besides all of the jobs that it can create, it plows back money to the country for selling unwilling products.
By contrast, there are several disadvantages to aircraft transportation. In the first place, many people say perishable goods are not suitable for transporting. In recent years with dramatic advances in technology, make it easier to preserve fresh fruits and vegetables over a long haul air flight. In the second place, another popular belief is that a country that imports goods from other countries do not necessarily suffer from a loss. As things stand right now, import and export usually go hand in hand or trade is not unilateral but bilateral.
By comparing and contrasting the positive and negative aspects of aircraft transportation, I believe that its upside is significantly more critical than its downside. To support my position, I would like to offer two primary arguments. Firstly, Doctor Riley, the well-versed head of the agricultural department of Oxford University, asserts that there is no need to increase our yields for eradicating hunger from the earth. Just need to stop putting our crops into belies of cattle and hands of dictators. Some times human problems required rational solutions. Secondly, the latest figures released by The World Health Organization (WHO) reflect that about five percent of the global population suffers from vitamin deficiency. In other words, aircraft transportation helps people much more than we think it does.
In conclusion, it can be stated that its advantage of aircraft transportation is more than its disadvantages. Nevertheless, the question is: Can it improve the health and happiness of human beings in general? Only time will tell, but in the meantime, aircraft transportation will continue to influence every aspect of our every day lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, another thing, in conclusion, in general, for one thing, in other words, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2078.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30102040816 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09597201062 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602040816327 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2580155433 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5833333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167903480983 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423709325772 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395872617493 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901755040453 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377065139007 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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