All education (primary, secondary,...) should be free to all people and paid and managed by the government.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is argued that the authority should subsidize all tuition fees for students and manage the education system from primary to further education, while there are some critics. I firmly believe tuition-free education would bring several benefits to the community. In the essay below, some features will be shed some light to support my view.
On the one hand, thanks to the government's subsidy, all children including underprivileged children could avail themselves of the opportunity to access basic education. Thus, they could have a decent preparation for their adulthood and turn over a new leaf. Moreover, it is true that the more people afford education, the lower the illiteracy rate is, therefore, awareness would be raised among citizens. Indeed, lack of knowledge and skills is responsible for unemployment which is attributed to the increasing thievery rate. Hence, providing education without charge is deemed to be a key to curb the likelihood of crime committed which is to blame for poverty and ignorance.
On the other hand, there are also various drawbacks that follow from the complimentary education. Firstly, if this policy was enforced, policy-makers would have to allocate the state budget. In other words, the government would have to impose higher tax on citizens or else put less priority on other sectors such as healthcare, national defence and so forth. Such sectors, by common consent, bring immediate benefit, meanwhile, it needs to be a long-run investment to reap the benefits from education. For instance, in my hometown in Vietnam, a myriad of patients fail to afford proper healthcare treatment and be in need of financial support.
In conclusion, the advantages of funding education outweigh the disadvantages. Education is always a considerable matter in many a nation. Accordingly, it is comprehensively necessary to make education become accessible for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...view. On the one hand, thanks to the governments subsidy, all children including underpr...
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Line 3, column 678, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h is to blame for poverty and ignorance. On the other hand, there are also variou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51700680272 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30395214451 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639455782313 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0544592308 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.133333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4666666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162532312597 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475767687514 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420454338852 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093832245952 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452567594535 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.