Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In technology-driven world, reading news on the internet have become more accessible and common among people. While I concur with this statement, I would argue that there will still be a great need of traditional newspapers in the future.
On the one hand, it is true that people tend to surf the internet to read news rather than reading newspapers. The first reason for this is that, with just one piece of electronic equipment such as laptops or smartphones, individuals can read news and be informed almost immediately. This advantage is very necessary in today's world which never stays the same. Additionally, since the internet is now much faster and larger than in the past, readers are able to get access to a large number of news contents with a little effort. As a result, people can read what interests them and save a large amount of time as well.
On the other hand, I believe that newspapers will remain an essential source of news. Firstly, because newspapers are verified carefully by writers and publishers in advance, the reliability of newspapers would be indisputable. Although it takes more time to publish a newspaper than to post an article on a website, the risk of fake news in newspapers is usually very low. Secondly, this is a case of personal preferences that can vary a lot. While some people would prefer the convenience of reading news on the internet, others are likely to be fascinated by the feeling of touching paper. For example, my uncle still buys newspapers daily to read because, apart from being informative, they bring him happy memories of his old life.
In conclusion, while the internet has become a great means to read news, I would argue that newspapers still have their own values which are irreplaceable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 477, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...past, readers are able to get access to a large number of news contents with a little effort. As ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78826110685 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.144396516 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.571428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9285714286 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311163646918 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107937732093 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075294336185 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186260568703 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424336752765 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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