Although more and more people read the news on the internet, newspaper will remain the main source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Newspaper has played a crucial role in providing news throughout the world. However, I believe that digital media is likely to replace its position.
The most important reason for that is the availability of smartphones. They are becoming cheaper and even in a low income country, everybody could afford their own personal devices and these handhelds are able to connect to the internet to satisfy their customers’ need. Publishers and press take advantages of high technology to publish books and news online. Therefore, people from any corner of the world are highly accessible to the most updated information without geographical boundary.
The another cause is about time saving. Newspapers need some time to edit and print out before in the audience’s hands. Meanwhile in a digital version, reporters have just published the news and immediately, everyone who has subscribed to the online press would read or watch the events without any interruption of time. Therefore, more and more people are likely to stick with cyber world when everything seems to be available for them. Instead, they just stay at home or office and know everything happen in the world, rather than going to the bookstores to buy a newspaper. This could save them time and money because the news online is free and much accessible.
Although in the few decades ago, newspaper was the dominant means of providing news throughout the globe, I am of convinced that the digital version would become the major source of information due to its availability and the expending in utilizing personal devices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 442, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
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Line 9, column 490, Rule ID: KNOW_NOW[4]
Message: Did you mean 'now'?
Suggestion: now
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22480620155 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83915985393 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1932323543 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.692307692 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195612766079 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579087127045 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562100147424 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106118486301 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322906572857 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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