Although more and more people read news on the internets. The traditional newspaper will remain the most important source of news.
These days, many people said that although news on the internet is becoming more and more popular, the traditional newspaper still makes up most of the news source. From my point of view, I am afraid I have to disagree with this view.
we live in an age when many of us use the internet every day because it is speed and convenience. that is why news on the internet is selected to update information instead of the traditional newspaper. Firstly, we can read the news everywhere, every time as long as we have the internet. I need a smartphone, or a laptop, or any device with an internet connection. Furthermore, news on the internet is real-time updated, and we can know any events after just a minute. Therefore, many people now have access to the internet and rely on it as their news source.
In contrast, traditional newspapers have many defects that limit their revenue. The first reason is that it is not fast enough to compete with online news. If we consider the newspaper production process, we can see that it takes few hours to update information. Secondly, newspaper production costs money, more expensive than news on the internet which is free. In addition, it also affects the environment when we have to cut down trees to have paper. although newspapers take a small part of the news source, such as the older person who can not use the internet, we can not deny that newspapers are more unpopular than online news.
In conclusion, I admit that newspapers still take a position as a news source, but more and more people will use the internet to access the news.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72597864769 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64659603291 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498220640569 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1340248888 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434814373364 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156783747496 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148627919487 0.0667982634062 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324930616594 0.151304729494 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912209179372 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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