animal extinction
It has become a controversial issue that an increasing number of animals are in danger of extinction. This essay will look at some primary causes of this issue and offer some possible solutions to tackle the problem.
There are a number of reasons for animal extinction. The first reason is the destruction of habitats. In the industrialized world, many forests are cut down to replace with skyscrapers, factories and companies, which is the main reason for the loss of many species. This is because when a habitat is destroyed, all living species occupying the habitat will reduce breeding capacity; thus populations will decline, and extinction becomes more likely. Another reason is illegal trafficking and wildlife trade, especially of threatened species. For instance, poaching of elephants for ivory and tigers for skins and bones will further enhance the risks of those species becoming extinct.
There are several actions that could be taken to mitigate the problem. Firstly, it is of utmost importance that we protect animals' habitats, especially those of endangered species. Governments and environmental organizations can identify and prioritize wild lands in need of protection, as well as provide support for native habitat restoration that assists in the recovery of once degraded ecosystems. Secondly, it is necessary that governments and individuals join hands to stop the illegal trade of endangered species. Governments can enforce stricter laws against wildlife trade, and implement extensive media coverage to raise environmental awareness. At an individual level, customers can refrain from buying products made from threatened species. This reduces demand for illegal wildlife products, and will ultimately reduce illegal wildlife trade in the long run.
In conclusion, natural habitat losses and illegal wildlife hunting and trafficking are the two main causes of animal extinction. To address this problem, governments must protect and restore the natural ecosystems, and everyone should join hands to stop the illegal trade of endangered species.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61464968153 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91602380919 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544585987261 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0824958003 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.705882353 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13049341981 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439057553502 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063569554633 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788139705052 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363910174471 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.