Many people believe that human beings have negative effect on the extinction of various kinds of species both on land and in the sea. This essay will present the possible causes of this issue as well as the appropriate remedies to deal with it.
The problem is attributable to 2 main reasons. One cause could be that the deforestation is more and more popular. A number of people cut down trees to make way for building houses, factories and urbanization; to harvest timber to create commercial items such as paper, furniture, homes and to make more land available for farming. Consequently, this affects the living habitats of animals. Secondly, another cause could be that the beaches covered with plastic waste which is littered into the sea by fisherman living along the coast and tourists. Plastic is the non-degradable material which means they will not be absorbed and recycled. When oceanic creatures and even birds consume plastic accidentally, they choke on it. This leads to a steady decline in their population.
Various measures can be taken in order to address the problem. Firstly, the government should collaborate with authorities on controlling timber export and import activities through gates in the border areas to prevent and strictly handle violations of timber harvesting, trading and transportation unlawfully. Besides, the government should raise awareness for people especially living in remote areas of law on forest resource protection as well as hazards of natural disasters caused by indiscriminate deforestation. Secondly, authorities should organize the campaigns to clean the beach every week and especially guide people to collect trash, do not throw garbage into the ocean directly. This can be done by placing rubbish bins and warning signs which indicate severe punishment along the coasts.
In conclusion, the extinction of numerous animals which results from many human activities, and there are several actions that can be taken to tackle this issue.
- Some people think that it is better for students to learn local history than world history.Do you agree or disagree? 60
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- The diagram shows the consumption of renewable energy in the USA from 1949-2008. 78
- TOPIC: The percentage of school aged boys in two different age groups who participated in 5 different sports in the UK in 2010. 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35238095238 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84626500695 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.018866837 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.375 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0926733865371 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.027380653561 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600676462825 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775489989586 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585795788069 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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