animals are in danger extinction.some people said that we should protect those animals which are useful to humans. to what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is true that many animal species are near to vanishing out from the world. Owing to the fact that someone argued that care should be given to those animals who helps the people. However, this essay disagrees the statement because all animals have the right to stay in the world either it is good or bad.
There are many reasons why people often argued to support some animals. firstly, some animals make problems for the public by attacking the crops, humans, and livestock. For example, wild animals like pigs, elephants, and deer often make problems for the farmland and agricultural workers. Secondly, these animals over pass the residential area, and the travel and transport, livelihood would be in a dangerous condition. There are many examples from the Malabar side of Kerala people who got injured from these kinds of endangered animals like tigers, and elephants.
On the other hand, these animals have the right to be protected. Initially, such animals have a tremendous place in wildlife and habitat. Many species are protected by these animals and they might rely to some extent for their wellbeing. For instance, India's national animal tiger has a huge role in national tourism and development. Likewise, preventing extinction of such animals would have been benefited for the forest and the natural enhancement. Their life cycle helps to modify habitat reconstruction and reduces the destruction of many other endangered plants to some extent.
extinction of animals is increasing, even though protecting all animals is worthwhile in some way or other. in my perception, it is not good to protect certain animals only.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Firstly
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Extinction
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Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20599250936 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62756972423 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569288389513 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9496367709 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.875 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297835687975 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105027711296 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494844751335 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195896533851 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417717067234 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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