Are higher taxes or lower taxes better for society?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words. You should spend no more than 40 minutes on this task.

There is a current contentious arguemnt over whether governments should impose more or less taxes on people to bring about a beneficiary effect on the scociety. I totally agree that higher taxes is a fundemental requirment for upgrading the public services and eradicating poverty through supplying unemployment benefits.

The main reason I believe that imposing higher taxes can have a better reflexion on the society is because tax money is essential to fund public services; therefore, higher taxes would lead to better overall services. A good illustration of that is the healthcare system which is totally dependant on money coloected from tax payers.Such money will be used for paying salaries of the staff and employees as well as maintianing and supplying hospitals and healthcare trusts with all the necessary equipments and medications.Therefore, higher taxes can promote better health of that society.

Another reason why I support the notion of higher taxes is the fact that money collected through taxes is used to pay unemployment benefits for those who lost their jobs or are unable to work. Higher taxes will provide a better support for those people so that they can live in dignity till they find another job or overcome their obstacles. One good example of this effect is social support system granted by the government .It is basically a financial support for those who are unable to work due to an illness or handicapping and those who recently lost their jobs.This system helps such people pay their rents and provide basic requirments like food ,and therefore actively contributes in eradicating poverty .In consquence, there will be less crime and safer communities.

In conclusion, I completely agree that higher taxes is a necessity to ameliorate public services and support unemployed citizens . Given this situation , it would be rational to support the government decision to impose higher taxes.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as, more or less

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30944625407 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94369615151 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540716612378 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => OK
Sentence length SD: 107.141650787 49.4020404114 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.111111111 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1111111111 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208663847783 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995765541736 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427355777332 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130428360521 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386063657712 0.056905535591 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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