Art is considered an important part of society as an expression of it’s culture. Do you think it is important for children to be taught art to focus on art rather than others subjects?
It’s often seen that art play a vital role of a society, for showing culture and other things we can easily exhibit our culture over the world by it. In my opinion children must be learn it because their creative minds will be develop by learning it,but others subjects should be learn besides it.
Firstly, learning art is important to find out creativity of a student, all of students have a creative mind. This creative mind would be come out by art.Studies have shown that those who learn art are very talented. Most people whom love to find creative gift from their beloved person in special occasion,creative students can make creative things and give their beloved person.
Secondly, students who cannot to talk specially young children they didn’t know how to talk they can expose their wishes or their needs by art.And the people who are dumb they cannot talk they also can express their view and anything by art. Even if you go to others country but you don’t know their language you can explain something by it.So, art is best way to explain something.
Finally, we know that art is useful study for children, but others subjects should be focus besides of art because students shoul be know about health and others knowledge. Others subjects makes students perfect they can know general knowledge by others subjects.
In conclusion, art is an essential part of learning art help a children to develop creativity as well express their thoughts beside art should be added others subjects.In a school curriculum shoul have a better opportunity for all subjects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 186.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78494623656 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37325250167 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629032258065 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.2437050014 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.142857143 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218009697552 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108601863867 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503152148042 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144409147795 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211413177846 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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