With the availability of information on the internet, public libraries are no longer necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
These days, It is clear that surfing internet is becoming a daily habit for many people. It provides access to a wide range of services like gaming and food ordering. It also provides access to many ebooks for educational purpose making people choose internet over libraries. But what is the most effective place to read books? Some people believe that reading online is very easy. I completely agree with and in this essay, I will support my opinion with examples.
Firstly, with access to the internet people can read content from their home. For example, public libraries in India are only based in major cities, compared to internet services in every house. In spite of travelling to major hubs for studying, people often choose their personal phone's or laptop's with internet connection for reading. Additionally, it saves time and money for travelling.
Another reason why public libraries are not necessary is that they don't have a wide range of books and articles. Only major libraries have access to most of the content. But in the internet people can download any book or article from any author belonging to any country. Moreover, people often find difficult to maintain extreme silence and discipline in the library premises. Finally, Many libraries lack technical content as they concentrate more on art and literature marking the way to digital content.
However, Many people argue that libraries help reduce distraction and improve concentration. They also find turning pages interesting over watching mobile. It is true that many online platforms cost a huge amount of money for downloading books. Some libraries also host original manuscripts of old writings which are very rare on the internet.
In conclusion, Although libraries help improve concentration, they lack in providing useful resources. Internet helps people work from home providing all the content from any academic. People can read or access books any time instead of going to the library. Personally, I believe that public libraries are only used for reading original copies and can be replaced with internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ibraries are not necessary is that they dont have a wide range of books and articles...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27893175074 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61794737204 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537091988131 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6958052659 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.347826087 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.652173913 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95652173913 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169359893011 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518925126384 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567733701563 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102563064014 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334643802474 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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