To live a healty life has always been a supreme goal of human beings. However, there is a claim that in the future the level of people`s health will decrease, which i completely agree with.
It is understandble that some people argue that all the authorities are devoting to the development of advanced medical technology, which is believed to have positive impact on people`s health. This can be seen in the solutions to severe diseases such as lung cancer in recent years. In addition, most of the people are having a growing awareness of keeping healthy. And this will contribute to a heathy future too.
However, the worries about the future lie in serious pollution on this planet and the advent of new type of diseases with it. It is inevitable that we are destroying the environment much more than ever. Tons of garbage produced on a daily basis and most of them are just simply buried under the ground. Some sewage and waste, inlcuding even nuclear waste are thrown into the ocean, entering the recycling system of the globe. And poor measures can be found to reverse the trend.
New type of disease come as a consequen of the further contamination to the planet. People will face huger challenges and the threat from diseases. Take the flu for example, the virus resulting flu evolves itself much faster than scientists can develop the vaccine or treatment.
Last but not least, human are seeing a growing population, especially in recent 100 years, which will consume the energy of the earth in a bigger scale and higher speed.
To conclude, i agree with the opinon that there will be a lower standdard of health in the future, due to the population, pollution and incoming diseases on the planet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...scale and higher speed. To conclude, i agree with the opinon that there will b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85472972973 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61724479655 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577702702703 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0370026111 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8125 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4375 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155993660771 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471513224959 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455537303869 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782051751516 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434957734795 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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