Undoubtedly, modern era play a crucial role in people's lifestyle. As a consequence, children might be affected by speed of development which is highly controversial nowadays. Is the pace of changing bitterly disappointed for youngsters?
On one hand, we totally aware that by improving the equipment, all things are being changed as well as people's interests and spending time. As a result, children tend to stay at home and entertain themselves by new hobbies and games launched recently. Also, they make an effort to contribute in different groups through internet access which allow them to communicate people indirectly in which channels and websites are closely associated with their talent and interest.
On the other hand, it is important to realize how to make arrangements for children's habit both indoors and outdoors which are really needed to be paid attention as well. In my view, there have been a wide range of drawbacks, for instance, while children grow up, they do not know how to make a contribution to natural world which is often suffered in industrial zones. Secondly, it is certainly true that physical activities are crucially more needed and the best way to achieve this is to permit them to spend a good part of each day playing outdoors in the fresh air. Moreover, parents should encourage their children playing out freely and give the chance to develop their curiosity.
In conclusion, it should be noted that governments and families have a responsibility to manage the way of life which is likely to be changed by new attractive device and technology in spite of promotions. Also, children have to be informed that outdoor activities guarantee their health considerably.
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 61
- The Table and the Bar chart below give information about travelling to work in Houston, Texas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 70
- Today, high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of society in which they are sold.To what extent do you agree or disagree. 69
- International visitor to new zealand transport used during visit 67
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my view, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13978494624 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91502095299 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623655913978 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7423767204 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6666666667 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209189402142 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070035136745 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508662095818 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114304603395 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426786819752 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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