Because many children are not able to learn foreign languages schools should not force them to learn foreign languages To what extent do you agree or disagree

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...d not make pupils learn these languages.I think by forcing children,government ca...
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...se languages.I think by forcing children,government cannot achieve positive result. First ...
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...t achieve positive result. First of all,there are different types of pupils who have ...
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...s who have various interests in schools.Some schoolchildren are clever at other subj...
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...other subjects except foreign languages.This does not mean that these pupils are stu...
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...hey do not have any ability or interest.We cannot judge them according to their in...
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...judge them according to their interests.Schools should give a right direction to these ...
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...elop their abilities. On the other hand,learning foreign languages is a demand of the wo...
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...eign languages is a demand of the world.Nowadays,all subjects are related to languages,e...
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...guages is a demand of the world.Nowadays,all subjects are related to languages,espec...
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...ys,all subjects are related to languages,especially,the English language.Providing that we ...
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...nguages,especially,the English language.Providing that we are going to make a contract wi...
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... to make a contract with other countries,our general language may also be English. ...
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... countries,our general language may also be English. Secondly,making pupils lear...
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...language may also be English. Secondly,making pupils learn foreign languages can lead...
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... lead to stress or lose self-confidence.As a result of this,children begin to thin...
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...lose self-confidence.As a result of this,children begin to think they cannot do anything ...
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...nything or they do not have any ability.In the future,they cannot achieve their am...
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...ey do not have any ability.In the future,they cannot achieve their ambitions. Howeve...
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...cannot achieve their ambitions. However,schools are responsible for teaching pupils,sch...
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...ools are responsible for teaching pupils,schools should explain them very few things at ...
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...d explain them very few things at least.Children should be able to respond the demand of...
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... during their learning process. Finally,because of developing the world,many people can...
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... Finally,because of developing the world,many people can run their businesses on thei...
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...e can run their businesses on their own.Although they did not learn foreign languages in...
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...n foreign languages in their school time,these children can find their ways without an...
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...ays without any difficulty. To conclude,despite having some advantages of forcing child...
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...cing children to learn foreign languages,government cannot put a requirement for pupils.I t...
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...ent cannot put a requirement for pupils.I think all children should have a right ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, at least, except for, i think, as a result, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85823754789 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.85851338488 2.80592935109 138% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547892720307 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.4060382677 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 218.428571429 106.682146367 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 37.2857142857 20.7667163134 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.5714285714 7.06120827912 277% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345218075483 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17852376806 0.084324248473 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388203954222 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17852376806 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388203954222 0.056905535591 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.8 13.0946893788 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.3 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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